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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2002-02-27 05:48 AM

I have told you my dream words
you have stood at the well
of my secrets
and held your bucket hands open
you hurried your woman
to my man fire place
and brought water woman songs
for the parch of my mouth

I heard you in the night
when your moan winds whispered
when you told me there
of your empty place trees

I brought my dreams in iron eggshells
we broke them together
with our mate dances
and stirred their batter blood to hardness

me made our statue children smile

©Dark

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-02-27 06:25 AM

A beautiful well to drink from DS. Love the new pic too.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-02-27 07:20 AM

did you hear me last night? I even closed all the windows, locked the doors, pulled the shades so no one would hear my whispers... always a pleasure to read you, D

M

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2002-02-27 09:49 AM

very cool write, they always are

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2002-02-27 11:01 AM

Sensual whispers flow on the winds caressing a fire you set with words the reveal secrets...Well done. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

5 posted 2002-02-27 01:55 PM

Fathoms rearing from secrets
turning granite to gold
and gold to breathing
beneath earth
in molten waters
crystal clear

So inspiring...

Sincerely,
Regina

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2002-02-27 02:00 PM

Dark Stranger - this piece asked if I would please read it one more time....I think I will. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2002-02-27 02:07 PM

GS, thank you for your walk in the secret places

NT, perhaps it was the wind or your whispers
that spoke to sky places...thank you

SEA, thank you for your eyes and touch thoughts

Startime, you bless me again, I thank you with humble hands

Rwood, your replies are my poem dreams, thank you for your touch

Chris, I am blessed by each of your reviews thank you so much

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-02-27 06:01 PM

WOW!!! Oohhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, such passion and imagery always fills your wonderful words! (big huggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is way cool! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2002-02-27 06:21 PM

DS

" brought my dreams in iron eggshells
we broke them together"

Your imagery is original and layered with sensuality. Much enjoyed!

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

10 posted 2002-02-27 07:50 PM

fragile dreams
stirred by the heart of another
are fed tenderly
to fill the soul

Your imagery quite potent here, DS... *s*

Indigo

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2002-02-27 08:09 PM

Oh my...Oh my....
You do tend to leave one speechless.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

12 posted 2002-02-27 08:19 PM

I have told you my dream words
you have stood at the well
of my secrets
and held your bucket hands open
you hurried your woman
to my man fire place
and brought water woman songs
for the parch of my mouth
===========================

these are powerful images and clever unique metaphors. quite a complex interesting write.
well done poet sir.

"Never made it as a wise man
couldn't cut it as a poor man stealin
Tired of livin like a blind man
sick of sight without a sense of feelin"

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2002-02-27 11:03 PM

noah, thank you my friend for the reviews

martie, you bless me often, I owe you my mind...

indigo, fragile is hard glass
with no stones sometimes..and melted butter others thank you

Nancy, I will put words
in your mouth...carefully? thank you

Janet Marie, I enjoy your replies
more than writing my poems

thank you

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