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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2002-02-27 02:25 AM

It's only forever
Is that too long?
That's all I need to
Finish the song

Time is illusion
It doesn't mean aught
When love comes to stay
Old battles are fought

It's only eternal
Not long at all
To raise me to heaven
Before I would fall

Time is a fleeting
Make each moment last
Take hold of loving
Before it is past

It's only a lifetime
And then beyond
Spend it in loving
In building the bond

Time is a circle
It goes round and round
And love is the finger
To which time is bound

It's infinity learning
Not much at all
It's only forever
To answer love's call

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-02-27 02:31 AM

The dicotomy of it knocks the breath out of me. The reality...I'm trying to believe. This, I understood, deeply.

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

2 posted 2002-02-27 02:35 AM

Beautiful.If we could all realize this, we'd have alot more love in our hearts.
Peaches

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-02-27 06:21 AM

beautiful thoughts...but I sometimes think it is forever that is the illusion, not time...I have time on my mind lately, maybe too much of it on my hands, also *s

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2002-02-27 08:08 AM

very nicely done!! This I enjoyed!!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2002-02-27 11:47 AM

It's only eternal
Not long at all
To raise me to heaven
Before I would fall
=========================
Time is a circle
It goes round and round
And love is the finger
To which time is bound
=========================

how did you get to be so wise in so few years?

love the rhythm of this Keth..rhymes divine set to a heart keeping time.
thanks for the hugs this morning girlie...and I send one back...
heart-hugs Keth
jm

"Never made it as a wise man
couldn't cut it as a poor man stealin
Tired of livin like a blind man
sick of sight without a sense of feelin"

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

6 posted 2002-02-27 12:41 PM

beautiful.... : )

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

7 posted 2002-02-27 12:47 PM

Kethp my absolutely favourite aunt thank you so much, this is so incredibly beautiful. It flows so sweetly into the heart like melted honey. This is wonderful writing and thank you sweet aunt

I wub you

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

[This message has been edited by Krissy (02-27-2002 12:48 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-02-27 01:08 PM

"Time is a circle
It goes round and round
And love is the finger
To which time is bound

It's infinity learning
Not much at all
It's only forever
To answer love's call"

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...I love this soooooo much, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) May we forever follow our dreams and infinitely embrace love with a warm smile of confidence, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2002-02-27 01:23 PM

Beautiful rhythm, beautiful rhyme, beautiful words... and did I mention I like this? *G*

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

10 posted 2002-02-27 01:32 PM

Kethry....as always a beautiful gem. You do know that I admire your poetry right.

Charisma

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

11 posted 2002-02-27 04:00 PM

Duncan,
sou casa me casa, two hearts matched forever. Thank you

peaches,
you got it in one, thanks.

naked thoughts,
you know what the devil does with idle hands? Thanks for spending some of that time in reply.

Cpat Hair,
if you are pleased I am pleased. Thank you.

JM,
and this is how you remind me *HuGS* and thanks

Zinsser,
thank you, beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

Krissy,
My absolutely favourite net niece, thanks for the bubbles and the sunshine in your replies.

Angel,
your words inspire me to greater things. Thank you.

suthern,
I believe you may have mentioned you liked this piece... in passing. It doesn't compare to your wonder in write but thank you anyway.

Charisma,
thank you for the affirmation and the praise.

Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

12 posted 2002-02-27 05:17 PM

Keth darling sister of my heart and keeper of my dreams secrets this is sooooooooo incredibly beautiful. Do you know that I’m transported to a land of rainbows and utter delight when I read your writing? Only you can stir this heart of mine like this. YOU are wonderful do you know that? Well you are
You know that this is utterly fabulous don’t you, the flow is just perfect

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

13 posted 2002-02-27 06:38 PM

Keth, this spoke to me, It says so so much. I love it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

14 posted 2002-02-27 07:59 PM

Now if everyone could see it this way think of the love in the world, what a thougth! Great poem Kethry.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

15 posted 2002-02-27 10:28 PM

Keth - Love is everlasting. Nicely done.

Dave

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

16 posted 2002-02-27 10:35 PM

It's only eternal
Not long at all
To raise me to heaven
Before I would fall

What a wonderful verse and a perfect poem.
I so enjoy the way you write Kethry~

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

17 posted 2002-02-27 10:36 PM

Hello Lynne

This was superbly written and so very much enjoyed.....I loved it. Such an important message was delivered here.

Take care.......Sue

Suetang

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

18 posted 2002-02-28 01:48 AM

Kethry - excellent write. I wonder though, is it for a lifetime? Wouldn't it be wonderful if it was...

BC

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