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Love bandit
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Love bandit |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
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Love bandit. Somehow, I am pulled, attracted to you Resisting is hopeless, what can I do? Your pull is awesome, I'm slipping from here Into your spell of this wonderful fear. I feel your hot love; the strength of your might You captured my soul in deep depths of night My body now slides under your cover Into you arms; I now am your lover. Now, my naked thoughts are only of you For you've mesmerized all that I can do There is no escape, I'm captured today I'm lost in your love in your swirling sway. Take me my darling, I'm yours just your way It's hopeless to fight; I'll give up and play And drown in your love, the rest of my life I'm captured; I'm yours I'll die of your knife. We now join in love you made us just one. Love bandit, you win; the battle is done Love bandit. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida February 27, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-27-2002 01:14 PM).] |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Wow!!!I love the passion and romance in this.Sometimes we don't get to choose were pulled right into their spell. Peaches |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Hi Peaches, Glad you liked.  ((Peaches)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Filled with the true passions of love...this is absolutely stunning, dear man...I love every word of it...I will be back later to do more commenting...*sigh* I have missed your words these past couple of days when I have been so busy...**big big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, sweet Karen, for your loving words. I have also missed your big, big hugs and your tasty words of honey. ((Karen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love this one Silver One... ages ago I wrote a poem about a bandit..I hope you enjoy: My Bandit, Is He he creeps into the mind as the dawning approaches a shadow of darkness, mutes the air, nothing heard but the sighs increasing in volume until realizing they are my own breaths overpowered by the scent of desires the strength of his hold the ties of control masked for all in search of hearts and smiles and takes with him those that he can capture my bandit, is he *s |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy oh this is sooooooo good, I am still having computer difficulties, not least because I now have to bargain for my time on here. This is as always wonderful I’ve missed your wonderful writing, your words flowing over my soul like melted honey, wonderful writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wow! Maureen, I love your poem. The night is still as he climbs up a tree And swings through her open window, free But she knows the game as she waits, with Her treasures to be stolen, for they are her gift. With Love, ((Maureen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Marsha, darling girl I have missed you, too. O where are you sweet darling girl The fire of love, God's golden pearl The love you bring so sweetly burns My soul cries, dies, for quick return. Hurry! Hurry! Back to me Bring me back your ecstasy Don't wait, Return! Just come somehow My arms are open, I'm ready now! For you love, I love you, Marsha ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love this so much, sweet friend, may you forever give yourself up to the beauty of love and share true happiness with her forever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is marvelous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Sensual and passionate, Newell......superbly written  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Newell, this is steamy.. I like this style on you. I did a poem once called Bandit of Love. Sandra |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Well Newell. I don't think you are a love bandit if she is that receptive. This is indeed a very loving poem. Lovely. floria Floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Lyra, for you kind words. ((Lyra)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sandra, thank you for your kind words. I'd like to read your poem, "Bandit of Love." Could you mail me a copy? ((Sandra)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, floria. I can dream can't I? ((floria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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