Open Poetry #19 |
My Child |
Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
My child Oh child of mine I love you so much I'm sorry for the history Causing you to repeat time I wish I could take all your pain And put it all on me For it wouldn't hurt anymore Then what my eyes alrady see I'm proud of you Your bravery too For it takes alot of gutts To really look then seek help When you and your world Are going nuts Hang in there Love Gods still above and understands your anger Just for today, shut up and listen Or you'll end up out there in danger Connie Mcdonald Copyright@2002 feb. 26, 2002 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'm sorry for the history Causing you to repeat time I wish I could take all your pain And put it all on me For it wouldn't hurt anymore Then what my eyes alrady see =================================== this is touching and moving...its beauty lies in its sincerety. Reminded me of a poem I read that a mother wrote to her son going off to war. well done poetess Connie...good to see you posting again. "Never made it as a wise man |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Thank You.... we all have our own wars... |
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