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Write Of Passage
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Write Of Passage |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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~Write Of Passage~ Write me in colours of passion’s fire Shade my heart in burning desire Tint me with a touch of delicate rose Paint me in this passionate pose Write me in shades of flickering flame Adorn my soul in cloak of scarlet name Brush my skin with the paint of you Colour me in love’s heated dew Write me in tints of your desire’s heat Clothe me in your own heartbeat Dress me in a gown of fire’s lace Craft me in fires heated race Write me in hues of scarlet blaze Paint my face in love’s amaze Stroke my soul with tender touch Sculpt me with this need of such Write me in colours of heated bliss Dress up my heart in timeless kiss Write my soul with lover’s desire Write me always in liquid fire Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (02-26-2002 10:19 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Don't need to...  you've done it quite well for yourself. I am so pleased with how you've come along in your poetry, my girl...it was right there all along...[Sunshine whistles, going back to polishing yet more diamonds in the rough....] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo passionately beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always alight these pages with your tender love and laughter! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Marsha, darling girl, My pen is a shaking with ink ecstasy As spirts are soaring and hugging in glee And when your words dance in a poem I read You pull me inside you, so magnetically. I turn into smoke as I vaporize Could you ever imagine the fire in my eyes A wonder of wonders my soul searching highs Together in stars let us make love in skies. Above all the hate and misery ears Above all the sadness with no pain or fears Above all the guilt, blame or shame, dear In your rainbow of colors, that you have penned here.. Rainbow of colors. I love you, Mushy, ((Marsha)) Newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-26-2002 04:36 PM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
WOW Marsha~ This is on fire....a stunning piece to keep.... I love the feeling and images of this....Lovely work...  Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm with Sunshine. . . this has always been in you. . . it's nice to see it come out. . . (Sven goes back into the mine to see what else is being polished back there) well done my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (02-26-2002 12:48 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - a little different write, well done my friend, well done. I like this style of writing you show here.... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marsha..you write as you respond..in liquid fire...*s |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Now you know Marsha, I love everything you write, right? But THIS is spectacular! THIS is a wonderful style for you...love it! *Oh, have to tell you..Krissy is a darling!* ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
You ARE liquid fire... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart thank you, you are too kind, and I thank you for all the encouragement. YOU have helped so much, and now I’m beginning to write almost   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy thank you always for your loving support Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy thank you for the poem it is splendid Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lauren darling girl YOU I think are one of the nicest souls to ever live, thank you Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
AD darling boy now you know this is just a pale reflection of your talent thank you Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl thank you for your smiling support always Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Nancy darling girl thank you for you always, YOU are always far too good to me Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Deca darling girl thank you for you always, real writing I wish I could but it’s something I’m working towards Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy thank you for you always Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Write me in tints of your desire’s heat Clothe me in your own heartbeat Dress me in a gown of fire’s lace Craft me in fires heated race I love your imagery here, Marsha.. Your poems always glow with your inner fire copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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