Open Poetry #19 |
Special Treatment |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Special Treatment you pressed my patience with irons of anger and wrinkled my heart in loneness scorching something meant forever silk is not made for tears it stains "Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
your way with words is soft sharp enjoyed the way you said what you said |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hmmm, don't know how this got so far away with so few comments, so, back up we go.........loved the way you made your point.... jimmy |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Darn!! I wish I had written this!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"silk is not made for tears it stains" (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Helen, this is soooooo very sad, I hope all is alright with you and now you have been wreathed in the blanket of true love that has washed all your tears away! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautifully heartaching! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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