Open Poetry #19 |
Alone Time |
rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
He brings me moments wrapped in time’s respire I am wordless in offering I can only feel Uncontrollably I may laugh with my heart I may cry tears that slide tenderly as a woman’s should when touched Each time is different as if the first New again and again Tiny seconds tied with a single ribbon streaming accepting each as a gift Sometimes I am mesmerized in ancient charm Each glance I am chanced to be in his eyes I fall weak I memorize his words ticking, discrete even feverish I become for more completely anxious in instances when my strength slips from me and drains my patience when I must go without him how I’d steal away behind the clock in shameless untamed momentum where I’d search for his lips and press one finger there Knowing the words longing to be declared as a stare of silence steals the notion in love’s brazen continuum becoming rapt in a bodily recital |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Regina, lovely to read your beautiful words tonight, you express yourself so well, one would be lucky to be so blessed as to have the care of your sincere heart, I hope that your words are read aloud to he, pages should not hide these thoughts, but be shown and treasured. Nice to find your work once again, Sincerely Rick |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
a gift of eyes and thoughts and heart edges you bless him here lovely work rwood |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful and softly sensual, sweet friend, may your loving heart forever beat in the rhythm of loves song and may you be alone in each others dreams of joy forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Bravo! You show us again the talent with words and images I have come to admire. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Absolutely . . . . . . . . . . . . Breathtaking... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
where I’d search for his lips and press one finger there Knowing the words longing to be declared rwood - being wrapped up in a man such as this..ooooooh it drives me crazy!! lol. wonderful write dear poetess. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
He brings me moments wrapped in time's respire I am wordless in offering I can only feel Uncontrollably I may laugh with my heart I may cry tears that slide tenderly as a woman's should when touched ============================ how I'd steal away behind the clock in shameless untamed momentum where I'd search for his lips and press one finger there Knowing the words longing to be declared as a stare of silence steals the notion in love's brazen continuum becoming rapt in a bodily recital ====================================== oh good grief!!! Does he have a brother???? rofl Breathtaking indeed...and how clever of you to write of "untamed momentum" and then do just that with the poem...your pace increased as the passion did till you took us to the creshendo ... and OH MY what a creshendo it tis..... "becoming rapt in a bodily recital have mercy baby..... *L* nothing left to do but sigh...and sign off in poetic and passionate envy very very cool write Regina... how wonderful to be this inspired . jm "Never made it as a wise man |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
rwood~ Amazing...write.... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What a wonderful way to feel about someone. You are so fortunate. You write glowingly of love. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
breathtaking. . . yes. . . that's a word that I would use for this. . . Regina, you never cease to amaze. . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Quite delicate, and intimate as suggested by the title. "Rapt" is excellent. (Must re-read again, then back). I like the way you've made the title work. I think that sometimes we forget how much the title "wants" to say. Very, very good. Bob |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
My dear friend, you are quite possibly the best romantic writer I have EVER read. I know when I see your name and read your poems there is going to always be this huge sigh at the end, and this time was certainly no exception. It is like you have a love paint box, and this is your canvas (well you know what I mean right LOL). Hugs, fantastic once again! ~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Regina So much beauty in your words. This was lovely. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Each glance I am chanced to be in his eyes I fall weak I memorize his words ticking, discrete Love brings such emotions out of us. There’s no feeling like that breathlessness, that pounding of the heart. I love the way you’ve written these feelings. Very cool Regina. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Reg, And what a recital...I love you for these poems. Awesome! |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
You amaze me once more. peaches |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*library* |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
MORE! *hugs* Michael Auguste~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
[This message has been edited by Larry C (04-04-2002 01:39 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This poem must bring the man you write of such pleasure. It is truly a gift and I can't help but envy your tender expression. You've a lovely heart Regina~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (04-04-2002 01:34 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice to read...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
still searching for "flaccid" .... funny thing...all I keep finding is poetry that soothes my soul and makes me wanna borrow your muse ok...I'm done or maybe its undone.... yeah thats me....flaccidly undone. LOL later-girlie-girl-gator mothyme We wish ourselves beautiful ... and cry in the night. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
He brings me moments wrapped in time’s respire I am wordless in offering I can only feel Uncontrollably I may laugh with my heart I may cry tears that slide tenderly as a woman’s should when touched *************** Look what I found!!!!!!!! okay, so that IS the ONLY way to find it in your works but hey, you should see what I found in JM's "Promised Sky" right below this post!!! I guess she didn't tell you that I was so persistant in proving a point did she?? ROFL Now relax and keep feeding us those wonderful works of yours so we can fatten up our poetic minds. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Oh you are hilarious!..both of you! I am grateful for any read of my writings..but you guys are just way tooo gracious! Love and squeezes! Sincerely, Reg |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
goodness...I'm speechless |
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