Open Poetry #19 |
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Lullabye Of Yearning |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
She embraced the dawn singing a sweet,lullabye to yesterday~~~~ Her heart suspended in animated wonder waiting for the touch, the caress of ~~~~a phantom lover. She knew him by heart, sight unseen. He was a myth, a legend of her own making. Her lullabye soft and full.Mellow; ~~~~yet intense. He was not far from her, only a dream away. Brought to life by a lullabye sung with a heart ~~~~full of yearning. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Sigh... great poem... full of yearning. ![]() |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
I sure can relate to this... I dream of 'her' in this case. Great feeling in this work! My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ivy Rose - great write, felt these also... BC |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh gosh, Ivy...I so know this feeling of yearning and wept as I read your words..*sigh* gentle you write with such a soft call out to him...I too call to a him softly but I will never hear a reply..that too I know...**big big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is so sa dbut beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always touch my heart as your visions are always so splendid! (kiss on cheek) May your lover come to you before your eyes and fill you with happiness forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ivy Rose- Lovely and tender write. I very much enjoyed this. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
How wonderful writing of a lullaby and love, great work here, enjoyed it, floria ![]() Floria |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I would love to hear that lullaby ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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