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Sun Days |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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The light in my life is forever changing the faintest glow flickers from a candle melting me slowly down casting shadows across the wall secret whispers in the wind blows through my window passing between the shades gleaming rays blur my vision parting between the clouds summer rains down the pane tapping a song and dance of sun days past. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Interesting images....and a bit of a mystical feel to it. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well thanks, I just want to see more clearly. The darn light is playing havoc on me.  Thanks again for such a nice reply. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hugging a *smile* out of you {{{{{{Lori}}}}}} M |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I loved this one, Lori... The light in my life is forever changing the faintest glow flickers from a candle melting me slowly down very beautiful writing...thanks for sharing it  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, Cool...and welcome back! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I love this, especially the last line! Sandra |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hmm, guess if I wanted to "see" as you do here I'd have to wash the darn windows and I sure wouldn't what to destroy all the life living on them, so...guess I'll continue to see through your lovely eyes...uh...words. jwesley |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thats how i feel sometimes...Winter is following me everywhere haa..looking forward to sun days again...hugss ~Victoria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I too year for these days all the time too, may each new day flicker with hope and laughter for you and may the joy of spring forever flourish in your golden heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are sunshine to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
nt~ Thank you for sharing your smile with me. Lyra~ That was such a nice reply. It is always good to see you here. Thank you so much. Larry~ Hey cool Daddy, thank you for that. Sandra~ There are Sunday's and then there are sun days and I am missing the warmth of them lately. Thank you dear girl. jwesley~ Thanks for putting a smile on my face, you are too sweet. Victoria~ I think you've hit on it, the winter chill is getting on my nerves, I need a good bake in the sun in order to warm up again. Thanks you. Noah~ How can I not be warmed by your replies, thank you for the flicker of hope. Really Noah, I appreciate your kindness so much. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the candle part....excellent....love that part....I really like this so many elements here I can relate to always fantastic writing from your pen  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You're sweet! Thank you SEA~ |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Wonderful use of imagery here. Peaches |
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