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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-25 08:51 AM

Did You See Me ?

did you dance
my heart
place it in
your hand to hold
do you know
my secrets
the ones
I never told
did you catch
my breath
as I was breathing
out in sigh
did you look
at a stranger
and see
that it was I

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-02-25 08:51 AM

Very nice Lady,,,I love how you write of feelings deep. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-25 08:56 AM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, may he forever see you and take you away into your dreams and make them all come true! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2002-02-25 08:47 PM

oops...doubled the below...sorry. j.

[This message has been edited by jwesley (02-25-2002 08:53 PM).]

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2002-02-25 08:49 PM

Very touching, my friend...for you are my friend even if I haven't put IM on my system...(hee, hee).

"I know the footprints in which you stand,
the air that you breathe,
the clouds you see,
the sunshine you feel.
I know the inner voice of your heart,
the yearning of your soul,
the cry swept away by the wind,
the tear falling from your eye.
I know your smile, your laugh
the very space in which you exist.
I know you as if we were one,
because I...am your friend."

walk easy...lady,

j.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2002-02-25 08:53 PM

I love this. Into the library it goes.

Contabo
Member

since 2001-11-21

Posts 159

6 posted 2002-02-25 08:53 PM

I am liking this too much for me.

Contabo

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2002-02-25 08:54 PM

A beautiful diplay of your talent.
It really flows well.

ThisDiamond

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

8 posted 2002-02-25 09:04 PM

floria...ty...you say the nicest things...helen

noah...you are soooooooooo sweet...helen

jim...that was so beautiful...just like you...thank you...helen

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

9 posted 2002-02-25 10:21 PM

oops...sorry guys missed you in my computer going down...

Serenity…from you this is a golden complement…and I blush…thank you so much…helen

Contabo…thank you...helen

Thisdiamond…I’m pleased you liked...helen

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2002-02-25 10:40 PM

Helen, this likes the sound of me saying wow....

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

11 posted 2002-02-25 11:19 PM

Your poems of late are very beautiful and touching.

~A~

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

12 posted 2002-02-26 10:46 AM

Utterly wondrous. I love the way you write.

Nan

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2002-02-26 10:51 AM

liked it

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