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Your song
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Your song |
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crazy4u Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 67 |
Sad is your tune Tune you’ve learned to play so well The melancholy music sings to all all fall into trance. Blue song about lost love Love lost only by the will of another You had a much different tune in your heart heart which now pumps to its beat. Notes swaying through the night Nights which do not exist. Dreams left to the imagination Imagination aloof. Banish the playing of this song Song with no basis. Foolish tune it is for all All who knowingly hum along. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Crazy4U~ I think this has such an interesting poetic scheme~ Greatly enjoyed~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
It is sometimes difficult to distinguish the various tunes of Love. It sounds that the tune you heard was only an echo of another. Hope you get to play your own Love song soon. The repetitiousness of your words resound your apparent sadness .... share a smile  !! |
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