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So Hard To Say Goodbye
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So Hard To Say Goodbye |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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As we said our last goodbyes Neither wanting to let go So much was my love Continuing to grow Just one more kiss before we'd part Would help to still my beating heart Do you feel my warm kiss? Do you like what you feel? Does your mind just like mine Not allow such feelings to be real? Always after being together I have trouble letting go There's so much I have to say So much I want you to know Never are there enough hours To spend here with you To have you here for 24 hours Still would never do How easily do I surrender To your tenderness and your charms How safe do I feel when I'm with you Surrounded by your loving arms Is it wrong for me to love you? With you is where I want to be So much warmth you radiate Right to the heart and soul of me When I close my eyes at night to sleep There's a piece of you in my heart I keep Whenever I feel pain When my thoughts are unclear I reach inside my heart And feel comfort that you're near An angel in disguise It comes as no surprise That you're a gift from heaven above As you surround me with your love Nothing else I wish to see Than you here beside me Where our spirits soar so free Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful with a tinge of sadness, sweet friend, I hope now you have found the love of your dreams and now you dream with him happily in love forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I relate to this intensely, Sue. Though I don't get to see him at all anymore, I remember how hard it was every time he left. Very emotional and poignant. Sandra |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Even I can relate to this one, go figure that one will you? sometimes the love is so intense you feel a part of you is missing when they are not within arm's reach. ~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can really relate to this one, more than you know. Thanks for letting me feel it again. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
When I close my eyes at night to sleep There's a piece of you in my heart I keep Whenever I feel pain When my thoughts are unclear I reach inside my heart And feel comfort that you're near I use to feel this way...I am over it now *s nice write M |
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