Open Poetry #19 |
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Such An Effect You Have On Me |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
I shine just like a beacon Whenever you are near My limbs sometimes turn to jelly At the sound of your voice I hear My face beams when in your presence As you lift me high above How crucial you are to my happiness As you surround me with your love Whether we're walking through the forest Or swimming in a sea of blue One thing that remains so strong Is this neverending love I feel for you You are the colors in my rainbow The treasure in my chest My oasis in the desert To me you are the best This love I've found is so precious How I'll treasure it and watch it grow You mean more to me than anything I just wanted you to know Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Oooohhhhh...this is sooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your beautiful words are always so lovely! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may love forever bring an effect of happiness to your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And surely he must..with such wonderful words gracing his sight.... |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sue He surely should know with this beautifully written piece. If he doesn't, I know of a hammer (only kidding). Great job putting your feelings and emotions in words. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such love flows within the visions of your words...This poem is so beautiful...I love it...**big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sue darling girl and no one can say that it doesn’t show, you really do shine a beacon of love here Wonderfully written and expressed ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice to appreciate someone...James |
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