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Don’t Leave Me In Silence
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Don’t Leave Me In Silence |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Don’t Leave Me In Silence don’t leave me in silence because you think it is only words maybe it is some I never heard one that could wrap me up at night spoken in pleasure at dawns first light evaporate all of my salty tears replacing trust where once were fears whisper it, chant it, sing it, say it in shout amazing what words can bring about just don’t leave me in silence "Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, a need for the words......I can relate  |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Beautifully written! Although I would say, listen carefully! Silence often speaks volumes. Often mere words are but useless noise. Silence can speak wonders to the soul. Do not actions often speak louder than words? ((1slick_lady)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-24-2002 04:47 PM).] |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is really good.... really |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh,I so agree. This has so much emotion, it literally made my heart pound. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is sooooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, may all the words yoiur heart desires to hear touch you and fill you with comfort forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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esclandre Member
since 2001-06-11
Posts 62Northern California |
exactly - the weight of silence is more unbearable than the sting of heavy-handed words. you've grasped onto that here with a firm hand showing the combination of despair and defiance that made this a good piece. esclandre [This message has been edited by esclandre (02-25-2002 01:57 AM).] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Wouldn't think of it Silence may speak like words but you can not answer |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yet another poem for my library!! Loved this, hugs to you!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
too many things go unspoken in the silence. . . always good to read your heart helen. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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