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Love's Triangle duet with Walker
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Love's Triangle duet with Walker |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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Love's Triangle by Walker and RosePetal When you came into his life we had loved countless times You are his past and I'm his present Yet he takes the both of us to heaven Beware don't be deceived his love breakes any heart He isn't perfect you see Though he is the one for me Yes I know how well he loves leaving his mark then letting go He wouldn't do that to me We share love unconditionally When the novelty wears off even you will want to break it off Why must you think like that? Deep down you must want him back Well I must confess his love was worth all the pain [This message has been edited by RosePetal (02-24-2002 02:17 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
felt like a tug of war.... I remember a time like this in my life... but it was high school....and i am so glad its over  great writing you two! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! YAY!!! You two did a wonderful job on this, I love it!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) I think many of us do indeed fall into these love triangles, may we all follow our hearts and choose the one that's right! YAY!!! We all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, my love and Walker, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Your work here is excellent. I suppose i can relate to this.. as I have witnessed my parents.. who have been together for 25 years and had four children, suddenly decide to break up. I have broken up a relationship with my ex-girl friend for the sole reason that I wanted to live the single life again. Ayyy.. the fallacy of modern love God alone is alone. Man is not. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I love the voices in this...well done. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Gotta admit, the title had me slapping Noah on the back for a sec! lol Good job on this, Joanna and walker. I like the 'she said, she said' way you did it. Love can be understood and experienced in so many ways...as you've shown here. Again, good job! |
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