peeling layers (following doreen's lead)

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Open Poetry #19

peeling layers (following doreen's lead)

kaile

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0 posted 2002-02-24 11:25 AM

Snigger away if you must
and I'll laugh along with you

But I can't be someone who works with machines
Miss Marple personified, I want to satisfy my curiosity in human nature

plus, I so need to be HEARD *sheepish grin*

Procrastination is my middle name
I won't change though;
I kinda adore my laidback attitude and easygoing ways
(so sorely missing in this go-get-it! world, i might add)

I won't eat any cup of worms for one million dollars,
thank you very much,
for i'm quite the pussycat(Promise you won't tell!)

And I'm sure Orlando Bloom wouldn't either
He, the epitome of coolness
with his intense looks and admirable archery

I wonder how it would be like to be him,
exploring Middle Earth and slaughtering evil with consummate ease,
feeling brotherhood surge with my veins and proving to be one

But then I would have to bring along
my Iced Milo and Snickers bar and pepperoni pizza
For they validate my existence

I hear you puke
but I would fit his shoes very well, mind you
For I am bred on macho-ism
Flowers are just flowers to me, for instance
I don't know enough to choose a favourite

And I don't shed tears at all;
they are my preciously guarded resources
Though I do feel my eyes redden
as I read outpourings from piptalk.com

My new year resolution was not to impose my personality on others
(I can be quite ruthless in disclosing myself)

Why this long monologue?
I hear you ask

You never pay attention, do you?

I told you right in the beginning
I need to be HEARD

[This message has been edited by faterider (02-24-2002 05:34 PM).]

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
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1 posted 2002-02-24 11:38 AM

i enjoyed doreen's poems so much..i simply had to write one myself...

doreen's efforts were so commendable that i could only appreciate them when i attempted to write one

doreen's musing /pip/Forum58/HTML/000630.html

doreen's tribute to Sunshine /pip/Forum58/HTMl/000693.html

and finally devine's questions /pip/Forum29/HTML/000872.html

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2002-02-24 05:32 PM

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