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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Artificial Thoughts Barely 5:30 a.m. CST awaking from the hold of dreaming you and them in storied lands of believability I find a need to hear an oceanic drift, so… in illumination of softly wired sun, a setting about of planned calm, the round rainbow of seaplay is placed tenderly within a chamber to ricochet back to me crushing waves upon waves, fluidly allowing me to smell in vast recesses of recall salt tang spray and shelled carcasses the gulls left behind if I close my eyes, sand wedges between my toes, cold still in this early morning reverie, colder still as foamed waves lick at my feet, taking me back to then… blame it on surround sound to drift me along when I was one with a western shore, wondering then if some one day I might capture for readability a sound of crashing waves such that someone landlocked could hear it through their eyes… and I can, if the landlocked reader would listen to the wind through the Indian grasses of summer, just listen… and find nothing artificial at all when I tell you… the sea sounds… just like thunder on the prairie when the wind blows listen… and the flute shall play you, too… ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 24 February 2002 |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
So very beautiful Karilea ... you're really giving me the itch for spring with these thoughts  so talented are you ... a true gift of descriptive writing |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Karilea, Beautifully written as always.You are definetly a gifted poetess.You are a mentor to me. Peaches |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
*bump* Michael Auguste~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautiful, Karilea...just beautiful. the round rainbow of seaplay is placed tenderly within a chamber to ricochet back to me crushing waves copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Another beauty Karilea...as you always do. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this actually made me cry.....it's perfect....and you took me home keeping this |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh Karilea, this was simply beautiful like you were peeking out my front window, and saying all that I always want to say but never found the words. That goodness there is a poet who speaks for those of us lost for words. ~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
How KEWL is this!!!... If you can create this magic in your reverie, I'd best not complain of a wintry drydock, eh???...Love it..   |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, for some reason this made me cry too, just thinking about how lovely it would be to see the ocean once more and feel that thought of the tidepulls clapping like the wind across the foothills where I live! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is an outstanding vision! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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