Open Poetry #19 |
sing song self |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
am going to spiral this poem because it’s a reflection of my life and with each enjambment and trochaic meter you will understand the shaky pattern the instability the walking- working- living- dying of my day-to-day die-to-die sing song self do you feel ashamed paying five cents for a peep? [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (02-23-2002 10:37 PM).] |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
clever, effective..... and no, i don't |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
You should raise the going rate!! And that's my ten cents.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nope. When did you start charging? |
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