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I Fell Hard
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I Fell Hard |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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I Fell Hard In the middle of quiet here my mind surrenders to you I stand unguarded to desires never told Wrapped completely in the silence the moments given to me I dream the sweetness of innocence of a wish taking hold... Verity howls endlessly tonight beneath that golden moon The sound of reality I've been hiding all along Truth is your light just seemed to take my breath And, I fell hard when your heart played it's loving song... ...And, your melody is heard within my very walk in life Your tenderness replaying within line after line It felt good to fall on such beautiful ground For, I fell hard the first time I looked into your eyes... You hang your head in knowing I think you hung the moon And, you fear where my heart may stand You so never meant for me to fall like I did But, I fell hard the first time you took my hand... You don't want me to love what I can't have When relaxing may just be everything you're afraid it will be Perhaps heaven lies on that urge to not wanting to let go But, I fell hard, so very hard, when you touched me... In the middle of quiet here my mind surrenders to you I stand unguarded to desires that should remain numb Wrapped completely in the silence the moments given to me I realize I fell hard for what we can never become... Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Ooohhhhh...this is sooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, I too know these feelings so much and sometimes we can't become all we want to be and what we expect out of love but as long as we feel secure and happy in loves arms, that's the most beautiful blessing for us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh saunni this read so beautifully gosh ya really tug this reader's heartstrings on this write you share with us 2day... This is precious... Smiles2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh yeah, I know how it is to fall!!! Nicely penned my friend |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I read this as if you had written it to me, and soon wished that someone had ... beautiful beautiful thoughts ~ |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Saunni, I believe you mirrored my souls current state...I always fall for what can never be. You said it perfectly... |
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