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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
 electric woman electric woman tingling at your fingertips shuddering with delight: I am but conduit that passes thru unseen veils You are more than dangerous current raw and energetic tamed only by a satyr of love helplessly drawn by enchantment your Pan's flute lures me to your bed like lullaby tempts sleep male and female receptacles into single outlet of need electric woman you electrify me! [This message has been edited by PearlsB4Swine (02-23-2002 04:00 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is a beautifully electrifying poem of passion, sweet friend, this is both beautiful and sensual! I LOVE IT!!! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wow! Where can I find one of these electric wonders? I want one! I want one! ((PersB4Swine)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
Noah: smiling, and laughing....had some difficulty with my first graphic, but got one to stick (had to use some static electricity, though) Thanks for checking in! Silver Streak: ~wagging my finger at you~ you can't have her! My electricity, and with the cost of utilities so high anymore, sharing is out of the question! PB4S |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Aw shucks. I thought love was to share. Not even a little spark? ((PB4S)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Great poem! Great graphics!! I'd use graphics for mine, but I can't get the tuct tape back off the screen!! ((hugs))!! Kat |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
How about electric guy, that sounds more appealing.Great write and pic. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
this is awesome sweetie! How nice of you to write a poem about ME! hahha just kidding |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Do you just plug em in when you're ready for action? James |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
charged up with purrrrrrfect thoughts! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
verrry cool and nice Storm visual heheh even nicer Storm visul? Halle Barry...smiles given from this poem shocked me! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at the way you talk back to yourself. Is this another Plug and Play option? |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I enjoyed this very much.Full of passion and I like the way you used electric in here. Peaches |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
Amusemi: ventured off into graphic-land, and shot three down before the fourth stuck! You say yours won't stay glued to your screen, even with duct tape? That would mean a person would have to come to your place to see it even??? hmmmmmmmm (What's for dinner? hehehe) Walker: Electric Guy? Let me make you an offer: take my poem, substitute masculine' for feminine' and let 'er rip! Why not!? I only bat from one side of the plate however. *smiles* Rose Petal: Hey!!!! who tol' ya?? hehehe Must be more than just a few 'Electric Ladies' out there. Good thing, too, huh? Thanks RP! Stay Plugged In, and keep your utility bills current (past Dues- are bad for credit) PB4S |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
JamesMichaelJohnBoyDavid: Let's just say that even with the lights out, the static 'discharge' lights up a room. Thanks James. Pandora: Ever petted a Kitty a little too fast, and watched the hair rise up to the palm. Same idea....yup! Thank you, Pandora Lady. W-Out-W: You got it, buddy! Storm she is: the X-Factor in many a men's hearts and fantasies; but merely a metaphor for the real McCoy. Halleberry....a new kind of fruit, perhaps? *wink* Got to go, here, and buy some more electrical tape, else I will be fried next time I try to steal a kiss! PB4S |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
Midnitesun: Talking back to myself is the only way I can get myself to pay attention to detail, Midnitesun. And Plug-N-Play works just fine for someone as non-techy as mice-elf. Laughing too! *smiles* Peaches: Thanks gal! To be honest, I wanted to show a bit more passion in the piece, but it finished itself before I could amend it. Hate it when that happens. That's a kind reply, though, and I thank you! Silver Streak: for the 2nd, time.....no Dude! ~laughing~ Not even if you bring an extension cord Not even if you offer Con Edison stock. But...hmm...my old black book might be for sale for a good penny! ~wink~ PearlsB thanks you all for the time and the replies!  PB4S |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love this and Storm.....rocks! my son has a poster of her and the other X men....she is my fav. |
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