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Krissy Dedicated to my daughter
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Krissy Dedicated to my daughter |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Krissy Dedicated to my daughter Krissy came through like a wind last night Scattering some smiles and a little light She alighted like a butterfly sipping at you Reading as much as she wished to do She left messages for you here and there On the poetry you all had to share She read your words muttering oh divine While I muttered that computer is mine Krissy whirled through this hallowed place Enclosing you in her happy embrace I’m in the door she squeaked with glee Then set about replying rapidly Typing so fast that I saw smoke rise Wearing an Oh Look in her eyes Oh mum she called out read this please While I muttered get your hands off my keys Krissy appeared here in these hallowed halls Her vibrant voice echoed off the walls She shouted her name out for all to hear Saying I’m Krissy I bring good cheer So now my daughter will be stopping by With laughter and her my oh my Mum have you seen the flow of this line While I mutter Krissy this haven was mine Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, I see now you have the haven back again! LOL! This is such a gorgeous tribute to your daughter, sweet friend, I too read all of Krissy's comments, they were all sooooooo beautiful and I hope she posts a poem soon for us all to enjoy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you both so much, sweet friends, this is outstanding! (BIG HUGGGSSSS) You have such a beautiful hearts, sweet Mushy and Krissy, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Marsha, darling girl. Krissy is so wonderful. I could immediately tell she was little Mushy, just full of joy and love for everybody. And what a mum you are. I adore Krissy, as I adore you. God has blessed you with a rare galaxy of Love. And I pray that His blessings in Love and Light will always be deep in your huge wonderful loving heart. I love you, Marsha and I love Krissy, because she seems to be just like you. So here is two kisses, one for each of you. XX. ((Marsha and Krissy)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-23-2002 03:33 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marsha, this is cute! I can see you are a very proud mum! And Krissy is just adorable! Perhaps there might have to be another computer in the house soon. Loved it Mushy Girl! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is delightful and refreshing! It made me smile. The first line drew me in, and the ending of all three were just lovely. Very loving and cute. |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Marsha - Very funny. It looks like you will have to get your daughter her own computer for her birthday. Dave |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
[Hearty chuckling to be heard...] And I thought you could keep secrets? Well, apparently the cat is out of the bag, and the daughter is in the room, so keep things clean, Mother... and it delights me to know that while you have a Krissy...I have a Krystal... and they both have poetic mothers! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy I thank you darling boy but Krissy really doesn’t write anything other than letters. Her least favourite subject at school was creative writing. She loves reading though so she’s happy to respond. I did say that since the general rule was to thank people by responding to their writing she wouldn’t be thanked and she said oh well tell them to thank me in other ways. I can’t imagine what she meant but knowing my Krissy it was something inappropriate. And I still don’t know who else she responded too, I only hope she didn't bounce around these hallowed halls too much.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy thank you muchly, although if you ask Krissy if she is very much like me she’ll deny it hotly. And to be honest although she sounds similar and is very much a lively soul I don’t think she is quite such a live wire. I know that would be too much to bear The next time she’s here I’ll give her your kiss. Thank you Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Nancy darling girl thank you muchly, she does actually have her own computer , at her own home, but she isn’t connected to the internet so she still uses her email addy here. In fact she’s actually been in her own place since Feb last year. When she wants to use the net she does it here. Normally she’s fairly good but when she got on here last night she was glued to the screen. She was so pleased to be a PIP’s member. She’s wanted to drop little notes on all and sundry for ever, but the thing that pushed her into plea bargaining with me was Keth’s poem Footprints. Well, lets just say it was the crowning point in a week of beauty where she couldn’t be the silent reader any longer. She has been reading you all for a few weeks, she just hadn’t joined as such. But last night she did Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Rosemary darling girl thank you muchly, I’m really pleased that you liked it. That first line is a definite description of Krissy last night she went through Passions like a dose of salts. I tried bribery, hot chocolate coffee, buttered toast, even chocolate mousse, she wasn’t budging an inch. I did actually wish to make some replies myself last night, but unfortunately it took a long time to get her off the computer. She had said at 1am she was going home but that didn’t transpire. Never mind she was happy Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dave darling boy she has it love, she isn’t a baby, we are talking 29 years old here. She hasn’t got the internet because for her it’s not worth having an extra phone line for something she’s not at home often enough to get the benefit of. She can’t tie up her ordinary line because of Key-holder duties so she uses mine. Also it means she gets to spend an evening or two with her mum. Glad you liked it kid Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling heart sister she’s a daughter to be proud of, except when she clogs up my reply time. We’ll work it out, she loves your writing darling girl that I do know. She said you have a sophisticated and complicated rhythm and rhyme patterns that look deceptively simple but aren’t. Well-educated darling heart isn’t she. Big grin it’s amazing what you pick up in college Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - a nice write for your daughter. Tell her I said hi... BC |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Marsha, This is one of your best. I love the way you went from proud mom to resentful computer-user in the space of a paragraph. I'm chuckling about this. Nan |
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