Open Poetry #19 |
a dream of dread |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
overhead fighting till their white turned red feathers floated as sky bled The doves of peace fought to their death. "I pray this is no omen's keep! If this be a dream of dread, would that I could dream my own death!" and surfaced from an ocean's dream. Upon my wake, I let loose scream-- one white feather, left behind. But shuddered thought's return: "Could be..." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is very scary.....I wouldn't have been able to sleep after this! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sea? who is sleeping? I just woke up and I'm still shaking this one off! sigh, I have horrible dreams sometimes! |
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marya2 Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 36 |
i am drawn to your poetry, it's magical to me, you don't mind do you? marya |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It's just a feather from your Angel's wing, serenity! Nothing to worry about, you rolled over too quickly and dislodged one. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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marya---not only do I not mind, I welcome the company...laughing, sometimes I give myself the creeps! and welcome to passions, btw! Thank you! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ooops...hey sharon..got my coffee now, and just lit a pitchfork...um, I mean cigarette! I swear I don't know why I do this to me...whew...ick. I'm better now! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Nope, after a dream like this I'd be up the rest of the night drinking coffee. No cup, just put sugar in the pot and drink it from there. LOL! Good writing, Karen |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Karen, this was such a sad and scary dream indeed, but it was only a dream and I believe that feather was one of an angel, for you are an angel to us all! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous writing! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mike and noah...egads this one was weird! and this was just PART of it..sigh, the rest was NOT rated G...shudders... Thanks guys, and hugs! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
girlie...did you eat POE-tatoe chips before bed? *sigh* ... if if were truly a poet, Id write you the RIGHT lullaby hugs me twin ... and there are no monsters under the bed baby...I promise. (yktikyk) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
If you were truly a poet???? JANET MARIE! Don't make me come over there! (me lazy, I want YOU to come HERE!!!) love you, m'twin! POE-tatoe chips...gawd, girl...lol |
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