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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-02-23 11:28 AM

Fed by your motion and what you for sea
Led there by rain's gentle calling
In the soft murmuring of the tides
I let you touch my heart
Thy touch, longing, grasping horizons blue
As our thoughts drift a mist the salty air
Jazz music is heard among the waves
Blissful and swathing to our soul engraves
Able and willing each sound performs
Dancing to and fro like an endless wave
Entrancing from the gentle night
Amidst the dunes, of refreshing dew
Playful diamonds take the nigh
Their shadows falling in lovely flight
Where but to depths only we may know
In endless rhythm, as hearts two beat
Each rise and fall
Endless and yet complete

~**~**~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-23-2002 11:29 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-23 11:34 AM

"Their shadows falling in lovely flight
Where but to depths only we may know
In endless rhythm, as hearts two beat
Each rise and fall
Endless and yet complete"

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...this was my favorite part, I love this entire duet, you two both did such a wonderful job, this is soooooo romantic and breathtaking! (BIG GROUP HUG) We all love you both so much, dearest friends, this is awesome, KUDOS TO YOU BOTH!!! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Lauren and Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2002-02-23 12:09 PM

Simply beautiful, you write well together!

marya2
Junior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 36

3 posted 2002-02-23 12:11 PM

listen to the soft muses floating around your words, this is SO lovely, like well, heck I don't know but I like it.

marya

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

4 posted 2002-02-23 12:22 PM

"In endless rhythm, as hearts two beat
Each rise and fall
Endless and yet complete"

Nice work! Lovely!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2002-02-23 01:40 PM

Noah~

you picked a favorite line for me as well....thank you...

~~

Sharon~

It was a great write and fun to do, thank you much for stopping by...

~~

marya2~

soft muse, perfectly said, thanks....

~~

Michael~

thanks friend for all your support....

~~

ctowen....

thank you for this magic write....

~~

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-23-2002 01:43 PM).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2002-02-23 01:53 PM

a beautiful lacing of muses and serenity.
this is lovely write of inner peace you two!!
hope to read more of your poetic ventures, your styles compliment one another.

"Our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power.
We have guided missiles and misguided men."

MLK

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-02-23 06:07 PM

Nice work together, much enjoyed.
Sandra

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-02-23 08:25 PM

The title alone told me I would love this. And I do. It is a beautiful rhythmic melody. Thank you. Both of you are so wonderful.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

9 posted 2002-02-23 08:30 PM

Hi Greeneyes, love the new pic! You and Craig did a fine duet here! I love it

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

10 posted 2002-02-23 09:18 PM

Lauren,
Well you did it! I can't tell who wrote what. Nice job.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2002-02-23 11:58 PM

Greeneyes - nice write... you both meshed these words as one...

BC

[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (02-23-2002 11:59 PM).]

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

12 posted 2002-02-24 12:07 PM

The flow of your words is smooth as silk.I'm in awe of reading this.I love the imagery you use.
Peaches

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2002-02-24 02:06 PM

Janet Marie~

Thank you sweet friend....I so appreciate you...

~~

Sandra~

Thank you for stopping in....what a treat your words are...

~~

Kacy~

a melody of words, I enjoyed that thank you...

~~

Joanna~

Thank my friend, for your compliment of words...

~~

Larry~

Thanks for your constant support, you know you are appreciated...

~~

Bill~

thanks my friend for peeking in....I always enjoy your comments....

~~

Peaches~

wow, thank you for such kind words....so glad you enjoyed...

Peace and HUGS to all....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-24-2002 02:06 PM).]

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

14 posted 2002-02-24 09:23 PM

If only in echo of Lauren's return replys,
thank you one and all. It was smooth sailing working with Lauren, the words just seemed to fall into place. I hope there will be more for all to share in the up and coming pages of PASSIONS. Again, thank you!!

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

15 posted 2002-02-24 10:17 PM

WONDERFULLY WRITTEN!!!!! Enjoyed this so very much. ***Ivy Rose

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