Open Poetry #19 |
A Whistle Day |
Martie
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Posts 28049California |
A Whistle day (Reposted with a wish for you all to have one of these of your own) Have you ever had a whistle day? One of those days where no matter what happens you just sail right through it, usually the sky is blue and the air clean and crisp, like an apple and just as sweet. That’s the way today was, and even though I was looking and couldn’t find where I needed to go, I kept on looking and eventually the curb slowed and the numbers corrected themselves, and the gate was open, even the dog was small and brown and licked my awwww. So, this whistle it just sounded sharp and keen across the sky, the trees were perfect outlines for zapping back and forth without touching a leaf or disturbing a pine cone and I just thought to write the notes down so I’d remember how the tune went you know, so I could play it again some cold December rain and know that no matter how bumpy, I’m talking here about the road the path that has no sign posts, the whistle can come back around and touch me, see. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this reminded me of the song in Snow White "Whistle While You Work", which I watched when I was a kid and still do every now and then, and it has touched me so much I try humming a merry tune as I am busy to keep me content! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, Yay for Whistle Day! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Sorry, I can't get out for all the snow, but that's O-kay, you can tell me all about it. right..? nice work sis, dale |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Martie, this is so charming! But I do have to wonder a bit, first you have Tim with calloused palms, and now a dog is licking your awwwww? "I'll have whatever she is having, folks!" (or has she been having what I am having?) Either way, Martie, I appreciate the smile this morning! |
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marya2 Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 36 |
this is cute, yep, I had a whistle day once and my tongue stuck to a peanut butter leftover on the roof of my mouth, Gawd, what a laugh that was! marya |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey! This is a Whistle Stop poem! You know I'm enjoying this...write away...right away! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I'm still wondering about that little dog! LOL! (teasing) Yes, I have days like this and hope everyone does as well. Thanks for the smile, Martie! *hugs* Michael Auguste~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Big smile, enjoyed the write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm smiling Martie! I love this one and also know those days you speak of. Don't ya just love 'em? ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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