Open Poetry #19 |
Wind me Around Again |
marya2 Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 36 |
Wind me around again i'm dry from losing you turn my faucets sideways just don't make me cry! i'll be jambing underneath the sink where pipes are frozen into possibilities once my heart sank but wait! hey! let's thaw attach a tail and fly in the wind let's sail! Wind me around again make me spin, march is coming, march me in! Come, let's play before the end of knowing...... cause sometimes you know, but you pretend you dont! hey, that's no way to fix a leaky faucet! the faucet still flows no one knows you are lost in the drain if you are truly lucky you disappear and the sock left behind never knows what happened to you. Look up one day and the sock will be flying through march winds... wound around again bold and restin' in downy blue...... marya [This message has been edited by marya2 (02-23-2002 11:21 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhh...THIS IS A FABULOUS FIRST POST, your wonderful words shine and hum the beauty of springs coming, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Marya, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! Ooohhhh...please check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! We all love you so so much, I can't wait to read more of your lovely words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marya, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton - Moderator (Passions In Poetry) |
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marya2 Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 36 |
wow, what a greeting, you all love me? That was fast! thankx, appreciate it, I'm a little aggressive in my poetry and weird, so thanx for the neat words. oh love and light to you too marya |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
excellent poem, and welcome to Passions Hey! have a look see if my sock is there will you? |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
great metaphors excellent use of words and sounds very emotive!! i enjoyed this... welcome to the blue pages. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I enjoyed your poem and hope you find a home here with us. As you can see some of us are effusive in our love of people and poetry! That's what makes us so unique. We are an eclectic bunch of writers - you'll fit right in! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! I'm going to like you...a lot! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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marya2 Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 36 |
doreen peri, you people like this? ha ha God, I've found a home for my silliness, thanx poetdevine, gosh, thanx much, i thought this was stupid marya |
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marya2 Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 36 |
Sunshine, thanx i'll like me a lot more when i figure out how to spell, work the buttons so my replies don't multiply, and learn everyone's name! ha ah thankx you're quite a charming group of blue people,, I mean people marya |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Welcome marya! I found this very refreshing and I do hope it's an indication of more to come! |
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marya2 Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 36 |
thanks serenity quite much, i wish i h ad more time for this!!!!! marya |
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alterego Member
since 2002-02-23
Posts 113Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
bump [This message has been edited by alterego (02-23-2002 12:41 PM).] |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
if you are truly lucky you disappear and the sock left behind never knows what happened to you. great meta4s.... i really like this your first post....Looking forward to seeing more of your work in blue Ps do you use "april fresh" downy too? Love, Light and Peace Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Great First Post! I look forward to seeing more of your work! ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Great images and WELCOME!!! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marya...Love your style. So unique and refreshing. Wonderful first post. ***Ivy Rose |
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marya2 Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 36 |
thankx folks, ok, you LIKE this???? I'm sitting here shaking my head. you're all quite nice. May love and light shine on everyone oh yes, Enchantress, i use downy and actually have been known to hug that blue bottle but I refuse to use a dryer, only a clothesline which is fantastic except when birds poop on my underwear!! marya [This message has been edited by marya2 (02-23-2002 02:33 PM).] |
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marya2 Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 36 |
God bless you Passions in Poetry thank you for the time I was here now it's time to disappear to where the peace is real at last to where I can forget my past ((((hug)))) marya [This message has been edited by marya2 (02-23-2002 09:16 PM).] |
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