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Dancing Deep Within
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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Dancing Deep Within By Larry Chadwick It’s funny how my feet don’t work, For the music that is in my head. But my hands seem to work just fine, With the music in my heart instead. Since I want to dance so much, I think I’ll listen to my heart. For that’s the one that matters, And the best place I can start. I think you’ll like the melody, That plays deep down inside. Put your ear upon my chest, I can prove I haven’t lied. So dance real still with me, It’s what I do the best. Now let me hear the tune, You're hiding in your breast. February 22, 2002 [This message has been edited by Larry C (02-23-2002 09:20 AM).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Larry, This is darling. I'm sorry, I know men don't want to hear anything called 'darling', but honest, it is. I like it. Nan |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
From one who can't dance with their feet, either...this is very cool! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Nan, You don't know enough men! lol I'm thrilled at your response. I meant every word I wrote. And thanks.  Duncan, Thanks Duncan...beats just sitting out the dance! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Larry, I really like this, makes me think of sweet snuggles |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, Perfect! Thanks tons. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Only one suggestion I would make to this heartfelt poem, check the last line, sound it out...one little edit and voila... heartstring perfection... I know this feeling, and you've captured it very well...and I'm glad to predict that when you are 90...you may not be shuffling those feet, but your heart will remain dancing... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Well Larry, I am so glad that your hands work just fine. Cause I really enjoy reading what you write. |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
Oooh... this took my breath away. Reminds me of a tender scene from an Indian movie...not to say that it's not original, but it (your poem)created a beautiful sensation in my heart...a sensation akin to the desire to dance. Simply beautiful and sweetly intense Neha [This message has been edited by Spirit Of Twilight (02-23-2002 08:42 AM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Larry darling boy now this is soooooooo incredibly well written, I love it. Well, if you’re asking I’m dancing darling boy. Utterly utterly perfect, I swear I could hear the music playing deep within As always the flow is divine and the structure is flawless, I doubt if you could write a bad poem if you tried.  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, Your tenderness was indeed not resented. A gentle correct immensely appreciated. Thank you so much. Bless you. SmartChick, Such very kind words. Thanks. Neha, Wow...Welcome to Passions! You'll be hearing from Sunshine. She's our unofficial greeter. Hope you like it here. I look for to reading your poetry and thank you for appreciating mine. Mushy, Well...finally, you may be wrong! LOL I'm fairly certain a bad poem I have already penned and probably will again. LOL But I am so glad you like my poems. Thanks. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ Lovely Dance my friend.... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I know just how you feel, whenever I tend to read a poem or something inspires me, I always seem to get a tune in my head and I just want to get up and dance for no reason! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words always dance with inspiration and delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
the last time i heard the melody of Love accompanied by a heartbeat it was sooooo beautiful and so i let mine be heard, too, but it was the last time i'll be able to do it, but thanks for asking, anyway  great write, romantic one |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Lovely... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, Thank you! Noah, Well now...that's the difference between you and I. I can't dance.  Thanks.dor, That's because you're trying to plan. You can't plan true love... Thank you so much dor. amusemi, Bless you and thanks. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Larry I feel another dance poem coming on.stop me..aack..it is about to take me over.. Seriously, this is great, a different kind of dance, I like it lots. And I have this dance just dying to come out... Sandra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, Will you teach it to me first?  Thanks. |
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