Open Poetry #19 |
Keyboard Is My Piano |
poeticdreamer Junior Member
since 2002-01-17
Posts 46 |
Keyboard is my piano: Playing out memories of then and now, Fingers tap dancing across letters forming a life, Thoughts flickering to life in electric window, Joy and sorrow becoming partners in this waltz, Love and hate in whirling dirvish romance song, Mind singing from atop a melodic mountain, Thinking just for me yet still just for you, Unsung lyrics unorganized but oh so real, Heart beat words tapping on your eyes door, Rhythmic expressions waiting for an answer, Brain in passionate concert before no audience, Never playing solo with music named desire. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh yeah, I can't play the piano, but I like the way you play the keyboard. Nice poem. Nan |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like this very much! well done |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like this! A lot! Keeping.... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a wonderful way to look at it. I've often regretted not playing a musical instrument, now I know I can play my keyboard! Thank you for this. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
lovely!! (watch out! don't start playing chords like i do... the words don't come out right... hehe) i really liked this one a lot! nice job! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love this one, sweet friend, your beautiful wordsa always touch my heart! This is sweet music to all our ears, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
poeticdreamer - sometimes at night I play my guitar with many of the same thoughts... BC |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Poeticdreamer...This is a dream of a poem. Love the imagery of the keyboard you used. Flights of fancy hidden in the fingers that softly touch the keys. ***Ivy Rose |
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