Open Poetry #19 |
A Face of Stone that Cries Alone |
Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
A Face of Stone that Cries Alone ~~~ A face reveals a story so just look into those eyes listening in a reading hall through smoke encircled sighs A face of stone that cries alone through many tears survives And circles back before the mob as consciousness revives ~ A shout of laughter echoes over mimic over mock He staggers from his chair as he volunteers to talk The picture of disgrace surely living from a bag The sight the smell the living hell have pinned him with a tag ~ Fifty honored poets express concerns about his ways We clapped we cheered they felt revered we showered them with praise But standing there before us living flesh upon the stage He stands alone a face of stone and we just spurn his cage ~~~ Crash Test 'Drunk Drivers' ... spare the dummies! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nothing to say but WOW! Sandra |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've read this three times, Rex, and the imagery is overwhelming...perhaps I am seeing more in this than there is...and on the other hand...perhaps I know this man... well done, Sir...your consciousness speaks loudly... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thanks Sandra ... 'wows' are graciously appreciated Karilea ... all I can say is 'wow' Thankyou |
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bad little dog Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 38city pound |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
WOW!!!!!!! Peaches |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent! Did this really happen? You've captured a reality here that MUST have happened.....very well done Rex. |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I found I could read several different viewpoints into this piece Rex ... each one unique. The depth in this piece is wonderful. Beautifully flowing and rhythmic, very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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