this race of life wont let me stop

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Open Poetry #19

this race of life wont let me stop

Guardurthoughts
Member

since 2001-10-16

Posts 66

0 posted 2002-02-22 08:28 PM

I sit heavy-heartedly
wishing, waiting, wanting
life is running me in a wicked race
must stop, cant go on.
Three small tears well up in my eyes
they stream down my face in heat screaming why
my mind is all a blurr my thoughts all a fuzz
blank stares, crooked smiles
cold heat rushes through my vains
this fake smile deems my name
never saying goodbye, didnt mean to say hello
this mask of mine from deep inside.
This race of life wont let me stop.

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~
"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-02-22 08:46 PM

Erica, this is really sad. And I understand tears. Sometimes, you just have to let them flow, and cleanse your eyes, and hope they help wash away some of the pain from deep inside. And then take the next step forward.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-02-22 08:59 PM

Erica, go on and cry. I'll cry with you. And when our heart has shed enough tears, the sun will follow the rain. With a rainbow. You'll see. A beautiful rainbow.

((Erica))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Little_White_Flowers
Junior Member

since 2002-01-27

Posts 23

3 posted 2002-02-22 10:12 PM

What a heart felt poem i hope that you feel better.

[This message has been edited by Little_White_Flowers (02-23-2002 04:01 PM).]

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