Open Poetry #19 |
Life Cycle |
Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Life Cycle free flowing over rock stream to river where salmon stop to leave their seed then pass away for new generation to continue life only to return someday Connie McDonald Copyright@2002 Feb 22, 2002 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Makes one glad we have parents... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo well-said, sweet friend, you describe the circle of life so wonderfully! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Connie, such nice thoughts here, love it. floria Floria |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Thanks everyone..... this is kind of a 2 tone poem.... one meaning... just the words you read..... the other our own children and how they repeat our patterns even when taught a diff life.... just reflecting |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Connie It is ovious that you are not just talking about salmon but life. Nicely done. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Ariana.... Thanks very much |
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