Open Poetry #19 |
Please...hold me in your arms |
BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA |
Please... hold me in your arms and dry my tears stay with me as I face my fears ~*~ I feel I've suffered for so very long but that source of suffering will soon be gone ~*~ Please... hold me in your arms touch my face stroke my hair I'm going places once, I'd never dare ~*~ But, I feel stronger now Knowing you has helped me some how That you have taught me to be more sure, and I see now I can endure ~*~ Please... hold me in your arms for when you do I feel safe from harm as long as I'm close to you ~*~ I believe we met because some higher power from above knew we each needed someone to give us love ~*~ I thank you lover for all you've done Together we've laughed, and cried, we listen, and care, and had our times of just plain fun ~*~ No matter how our love life ends I know for sure we'll be forever friends ~*~ Please... hold me in your arms just don't let go! I love you dearly I think you know. [This message has been edited by BtwnRockandHardPlace (02-22-2002 08:04 PM).] |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
seems so very honest the emotions perfection Thanks Connie |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
That's love, I liked this poem very much. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BtwnRockandHardPlace - I love this poem of openiness with ones' feelings. Nice write... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always express yourself so lovingly, this is a gorgeous poem of true emotion! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benita, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I think you know" I really liked this...James |
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