(poem) Wee hour temptation.

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Open Poetry #19

(poem) Wee hour temptation.

haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

0 posted 2002-02-22 03:41 PM

Wee hour temptation.

Long after the eager hour hand
sweeps swiftly past twelve AM.
Still before the sun embarks
it’s journey of the new day.
Two souls are involved in charisma,
as temptation unites their fires.

Fingers play eloquently with keys.
Eyes envision the sculpture of all.
Hearts tense in expectation unknown.
Changing bodies from and to while,
the swollen craves and the dripping desires.

Unsure of boundaries, the delight.
As mind caresses touches closer than law.
The want so nimble to taste.
Succulently wet, implausibly hard,
the recipe for, wee hour temptation.

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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1 posted 2002-02-22 04:06 PM

i would suggest that this is very hot.....
and nicely written

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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2 posted 2002-02-22 06:00 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is beautifully sensual, sweet friend, this is a warm and wonderful write! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, such sweet passion flows from your pen! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

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3 posted 2002-02-22 07:11 PM

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