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Heart Wanting
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Heart Wanting |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“HEART WANTING” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Had a dream during last night, was walking through the park… Heard some noises from the lake, couldn’t see much, it was dark… Looked all over until I found, near the water a little duckling… Was making these funny sounds, knew this one, had to be aching… Picked it up, soft ball of fuzz, held it closer to me, tenderly… Felt its heart beating slower, then it fell asleep, just barely… Wasn’t quite sure about this, not knowing what it meant… Perhaps it was about you, a heart wanting to be content… ~~~~ |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
This is GREAT! Good stuff.. and I felt like i was right there... My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh Bill..this was fantastic..just beautiful lovely thoughts indeed ~Vic |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
What sweet thoughts these are Bill...floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you always have such a tender heart that has so much love to share, once I helped a little bird too who feel from the nest, and I helped it back into its nest in the tree! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is so soft and gentle poetic beauty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sahring! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
bill...once again you leave my heart aflutter...helen |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill, Awwwwwww.....  I like this.. very sweet sir.  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill - This is a sweet little poem - loved it . Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
bill, your poems are always the best! I enjoy them to the max! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wasn’t quite sure about this, not knowing what it meant… Perhaps it was about you, a heart wanting to be content… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bill...I absolutely LOVE this closing!! Wonderful...this one is a keeper! ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now, this is a unique perspective on the subject. . . great job BC. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Another nicely soft poem..well penned.. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* another fabulous gem....love it! Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I had a dream last night, that made me feel so happy. And then I woke up, and reality slapped me in the head. Sigh. Sandra |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Hi Bill it’s Krissy, (Marsha’s daughter). Not sure which reply you’ll read first so I’ll leave the introduction on both I begged mum to let me join so I can leave little notes like she does. So here’s your little note, I love this it’s very expressive the image is so clear, only excellent writers can do this. This is absolutely outstanding writing I really do love this, I see I beat mum this time, grins Well written Bill very well written, did I tell you I’m a fan of yours?   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, A warm fuzzy to brighten my day. Excellent. Why aren't you in Florida? Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a warm poem to warm the heart on a cold snowy Friday night...Magnificent writing, Bill...I love it...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Bill...James |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Sweet and shows the incredible capacity for caring you have. Beautiful poem. |
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