Open Poetry #19 |
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Earth and Fire |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Feel the earth on my face, face down in ground, Feel fire in my soul, cold yet burning, See black consuming, entombing all sound, See nothing at all, call words they’re spurning. Be evermore still, chill in always flames, Be nowhere but sent, bent in pain of years, Nothing but decay, stay without remains, Nothing but your ache, take only your fears. Earth you now will be, free only to rot, Earth you now will stay, way down beneath feet, Fire will torment, spent till years forgot, Fire punishing, brings past sins to greet. Earth and fire, desire lost souls in time, Fire and earth, worth only a simple rhyme. Gloom |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
The cold is only your flesh. Only the spirit exists! All else is simply spirit residue from spirit play. ![]() ((Gloom) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wow again a terrific powerful write, I can't help but be drawn to your poetry, It is so strong and so real. I hope you don't stay in the dark prof. I is really nice in the light. hey come out and see for yourself. LOL floria Floria |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Silver Streak, Glad you liked, I agree This is about that cold body left behind, Perhaps sometime I’ll write about the spirit’s journey, When I feel myself spiritually capable. Thank you, Strbbux, I’ve been known to venture out into the bright sunlight, After all you can’t play golf a Night. Glad you enjoy. Gloom |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is ominous...... very good : ) Fear not death look upon it at one once you knew for right there you can recognize the shell thats left behind but void of all that made them, them the soul, the heart, the mind I feel were just passing through..... just temporary place of learning |
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