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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-02-22 06:04 AM

My Heart Still Longs

Could this be the end
Of forever I spoke
Had I been tricked
Used as a joke

Why am I yearning
In heart existing
Your gutless silence
Knife twisting

Heart being fooled
I was decieved
I had failed to see
Having believed

Smiles cover pain
Of my mistake
Heartbreak hides
The inside ache

In all this trickery
Cruel pretend
My heart still longs
I loved a friend

Hope ©2002

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2002-02-22 03:45 PM

the ache stings here. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-02-22 04:15 PM

Gosh Hope...this feeling is part of why I wrote the poem I posted earlier this afternoon. Deception is so painful...I hate to see anyone ever be led along with the
feeling of caring from another...only to
be led down a path that can't be walked
together... I pray you are not feeling this
right now..

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

3 posted 2002-02-22 04:22 PM

Oh how your poem just touches the core of my heart...
Hugs2uPoetFriend and thank you4 this precious read...
*~coco~*

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2002-02-22 04:25 PM

I know how much this hurts. And how the heart still longs. Take care. Nicely expressed.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-02-22 05:34 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Hope, this is so heartwrenching, my heart goes out to you and I hope now you have found true love to hold onto and fill youw it joy forever to stop the hurt of yearning! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts are always with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shien upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

6 posted 2002-02-22 06:09 PM

Oh, this is so well-written, and tugs at the heart.

Nan

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