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Copper Green Heart
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Copper Green Heart |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
What conjecture Irradiates Your copper green heart... An unresponsive soul Poised Upon our absent settee Yearns Calls For figurative repose. Oh, temperate gristle of life Sever hope- Obliterate dreams- Yield to avantegard emotion. In undaunted timimg, Forego docility, Scream- Then comply, My emissary heart, Castigate this copper stain Remain ...golden. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
amusemi - you sure know the language well. I like what you did with this write... BC |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
gold doesn't tarnish, copper does alas  |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Thanks Bill..."I had a lonely childhood...the dictionary was my friend..." (dramatically feigns the 'woe is me stance') Ecrivan-right back at ya |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
an interesting read...and nice use of language... I enjoyed |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
Amusemi....*smiling* didn't forget about you! Been a wee bit busy, but the parallels between a neglected bronze/copper, as it turns to an aged unsightly green described so well the feeling of lost and damaged love here. Such wonderful descriptive phrasing. Hope you are well, and smile at the sun! PB4S |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Amusemi, An interesting write, enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) I understand how you feel, sweet friend, I too had no friends when I was very young and I actually didn't discover writing until I was sixteen two years ago! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooo wonderfully expressed! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
amusemi...I like the subtle; yet simmering emotion beneath your words. The poem is an excellent display of magic within words. ***Ivy Rose |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Enjoyed very much. Excellent write. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your well worded quill writes awesomely... Well done... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
..."I had a lonely childhood...the dictionary was my friend..." And you have put that friendship to good use... more, please... |
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