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If You Will Dance With Me
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If You Will Dance With Me |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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If You Will Dance With Me Can you sense the singing of stars flowing on gentle breeze Do you hear the tones of guitars playing tunes that will please There’s music written in twilight coming from loving hands It softly beckons me tonight, a request that commands While embraced I sway with each note my heart begins to pound The passion of the words you wrote fills silent air with sound Heat builds as my desires ignite from the words your heart sings I melt with the joy you excite as you caress the strings A magic spell I fall under when my heart asks a plea I’m lost in this dream to wonder if you will dance with me Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Karen: This is such a pretty poem. You sure can create a romantic atmosphere in a poem! I found that this flowed so well with the thoughts! Great work! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is beautiful, Karen...  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen, this is such a beautiful dance! Enjoyed so much this evening. Thank you for this one. ~Hugs, Nancy~  ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Startime...James |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Karen, this poem is so very beautiful. Sure! I'll play for you! What key? Or applaud as you swing romantically around the floor. Or if you ever need a partner, I'm always here. To dance with you would be a wonderful, wonderful dream. Just whisper and I'll come running. ((Karen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Karen - this is gorgeous, I love it. I would dance with you the night away. To write like this your soul feels many soft thoughts... Yes, I would dance... BC |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, I bet there are lots of dance offers from this. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bump! How did I ever miss this one?? My lady...thou must know that mine knees knock and feet do step...Yet thee might have thy next dance....Wilt thee?? |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Karen, He would have to be crazy not to dance with you. Lovely romantic poem. floria Floria |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Beautiful poem. Nan |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Hi there Karen it’s Krissy, I’m Marsha’s daughter, this is such a pretty poem it gives me such a wonderful picture , this is very very well written I think it’s absolutely super. Well done, very well done   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So romantic, I love the images here. |
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