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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-02-21 12:35 PM

And we whispered
Of passion held
In our arms
Laughed when
The soft sound
Of snow falling
Was a gentle
Reminder of how
The world is light
with motion

I sit and
Listen to time
Roll by on waves of
Silence
Yet still hear
Our words to each Other

White roses reflect
The windows of
My Heart, as the
Music of flutes
Play their
Harmonic melody
In sweet slumber

I awoke
To brilliant moonlight
Playing with the
Edges of motion
And the echoing
Shadows, dancing in
An orchestra of diamonds

That first winter
I cried, for the
Depth between
Us, for the lullaby
Of life we share

And

How amazing it is
To love you

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-21-2002 02:01 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-02-21 12:39 PM

Greeneyes,
Lovely, enjoyed the read.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-02-21 01:02 PM

I awoke
To brilliant moonlight
Playing with the
Edges of motion
And the echoing
Shadows, dancing in
An orchestra of diamonds

That first winter
I cried, for the
Depth between
Us, for the lullaby
Of life we share

And

How amazing it is
To love you
============================

*SIGH*
I do so love your "lullabies"
this is so soft spokenly beautiful.
You write like your pen is filled with feathers and whispers, snowflakes and sunbeams...summer breezes and spring rains and ... *sighs*

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

3 posted 2002-02-21 01:04 PM

And lucky he as well, very nice.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-02-21 01:11 PM

Wow!
That was wonderful!
Lucky you and him

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-02-21 01:19 PM

Wow, Lauren...I love the soft way you write.

The soft sound
Of snow falling
Was a gentle
Reminder of how
The world is light
And motion

I think your poetry is as soft as a gentle snowfall.
I also like your new photo

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-02-21 02:15 PM

and the snow fell. . .

you know, I'm always amazed with how you write. . . and this is no different. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

7 posted 2002-02-21 02:32 PM

Lauren, you write with the touch of an angel.
((Lauren))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

8 posted 2002-02-21 02:32 PM

Lauren,
To be that lucky! Wow. Great write.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2002-02-21 03:18 PM

softly your words whisper to me Lauren, so soft....so beautiful. Well done hon. Hugs

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

10 posted 2002-02-21 03:22 PM

Gorgeous!!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2002-02-21 04:51 PM

time too
with the others
seamless pleasures

well written ms L

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2002-02-21 04:56 PM

"I awoke
To brilliant moonlight
Playing with the
Edges of motion
And the echoing
Shadows, dancing in
An orchestra of diamonds

That first winter
I cried, for the
Depth between
Us, for the lullaby
Of life we share

And

How amazing it is
To love you"

BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is one of my favorites of yet, I love your new picture so much too, your smile makes me smile too! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may the windows of your heart forever seep with the light of true love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-21-2002 04:56 PM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

13 posted 2002-02-21 06:51 PM

Just beautiful Lauren, especially the wonderful last two lines. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

14 posted 2002-02-21 06:51 PM

"I sit and
Listen to time
Roll by on waves of
Silence"

This is just lovely, Lauren, as is the new picture of you here. Very beautiful writing, my friend. *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

15 posted 2002-02-21 07:32 PM

*sigh* absolutely stunning.....I love it...I love the way it feels...so filled with love and passion...BRAVO!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

16 posted 2002-02-21 10:03 PM

Greeneyes - another beautiful write. You are a master...
btw - like your new photo
BC

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