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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-02-21 10:15 AM

“HAVE YOU SEEN”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I woke early this
morning with dream
thoughts on my
mind, about what
I see when sitting
on a mountain high,
when I’m alone…

I see things of
beauty, snow capped
mountains reaching
from a valley into
the clouds, ocean
blue as the sky,
lakes of glass,
a forest filled
with life…

But it troubles me,
for I wonder
inside if
you have seen,
any of this too…
~~~~

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-02-21 10:24 AM

Sometimes, I look north into the sky and wonder much the same thing. Good job on this, BC.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-02-21 10:43 AM

I wonder, too

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-02-21 10:54 AM

I like this, Bill. Still sitting on romance mountain, are you?
Sandra

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-02-21 11:54 AM

Bill~

Beauty is all around....surely most see that right? very nice on this, leaves me thinking what beauty I will see today....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-21-2002 03:00 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-02-21 12:05 PM

(smiles) Awwwwww, I'm sure she will forever will when you are there by her side always, this is soooo lovely! (smiles) May you forever hold your hand on Romance Mountain and share visions of eternal paradise, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

6 posted 2002-02-21 02:12 PM

I love mountains, don't see any here. Loved your poem.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2002-02-21 05:25 PM

Bill darling boy this is soooooooo incredibly dreamy, written with your perfect feel for romance, soft and wondering. Questions that are gentle and yet profound.

As always the flow is divine and the structure is flawless, I doubt if you could write a bad poem if you tried. Wonderful utterly wonderful work simply the best.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-02-21 06:53 PM

Right to my heart with this poem. And I also wish that everyone of my loved ones and friends enjoy nature as much as I do. Love this one Bill. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2002-02-21 07:43 PM

loved it

one of your best

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2002-02-21 08:01 PM

Wonderful Bill....beautiful view out there, eh? This is very well done and enjoyed much!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

11 posted 2002-02-21 09:41 PM

I see the voice of heaven lingering round lush mornings full of spirit. I live right in the foothills of the Great Smoky Mountains. Can't help but look up in awe. Great Verse!!!

Sincerely,
Regina

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