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Heated love A Sonnet for Marsha
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Heated love A Sonnet for Marsha |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
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Heated love - A Sonnet for Marsha "How beautiful you are and how pleasing, O love, with your delights! " NIV Song of Solomon 7:6 She came to me upon the wings of time An angel that God sent to make me warm Perfect in her way melting me to rhyme She called on me, come darling take my arm. Her outstretched hand I touched in fiery mist I took her spirit quickly in my soul And then we flew to heaven as we kissed My broken parts were mended and made whole. At once we knew our destiny was set In all of time as we found purest love No jealousy, no guilt nor shame, and yet Our love was engineered by God above. For though we love in hottest human ways Our love is pure as only God could make Hot lightning fires across our poles, for days We live our lives for God's eternal sake. Darling girl and darling boy in, love free In heated love in God's eternity. Heated love. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida February 20, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-21-2002 12:08 AM).] |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Stunning...She must love this!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very..very nice...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy this is truly fabulous, I know I always say this is soooooooooooo good but sometimes even the best superlatives in the dictionary don’t suffice. This is one of those times You’ve painted a wonderful picture here, each line a brushstroke bringing the painting to vibrant life as only YOU can do so. As I said outstandingly good. The flow of this is superb and this is a gift of such awesome magnitude, as a poem this is the ultimate romantic song. You know I utterly utterly love this don’t you that came from above a touch that just flew into me granting me love’s sanctity I found peace within you there is hope living too you gave love liberty So now I’m free Love pure love    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done ... both of you  |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
~pure~ ~love~ that came from above a touch that just flew into me granting me love’s sanctity I found peace within you there is hope living too you gave love liberty So now I’m free Love pure love ' In God So free Love was Given to me And now you are Loving Him and me We've both found His love so free so now my darling I give It ' Back to thee Free! I love you, Marsha xo ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-21-2002 11:16 AM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, amuseme for you kind thoughts. ((amuseme)) Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you James for your very kind words. ((James)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Interloper. ((Interloper)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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