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It's My Day
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It's My Day |
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Maverick Wolf Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 94Scandia, MN |
The day has begun The sun has risen But the clouds deny The street lights glow Illuminating the mist That shrouds their warmth The breeze blows gently And the mist plays upon my face It lingers unnoticed The air is cool Heavy with moisture Its aroma calms me The air chills my bones My heart chills the air For this is my day [This message has been edited by Maverick Wolf (02-20-2002 10:55 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Awwwwww, such serenity fills your words, sweet friend, your lovely words always make me smile! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Jason, I hope everyday is a good day for you Since that is unlikely, I'll just say make the best of every day |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
I really liked this one from you. It is a different style than what you normally write. Very good though! (If you haven't guessed, I'm catching up on my posts!) "Why should I live? Why should I do anything? Is there in life any purpose which the inevitable death that awaits me does not undo and destroy?" -- Le |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
An enjoyable read. I liked the contrasting imagery. |
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