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O_Dara
Junior Member

since 2002-02-20

Posts 11

0 posted 2002-02-20 09:34 PM

I'm holding on to the crimson tide,
as the waves come crashing down.
It's all I see, so far and wide.
I can faintly hear the sounds.

My heart is pounding,as fear sets in.
My body's so tired it shakes.
The raging sea,it has no end.
How much more,can I take?

I dare not put down my guard.
The water's so deep and scary.
I've been trying so very hard,
with this load I have to carry.

It's so lonely and cold,
this place I'm in, you see.
I have no one to hold,
I'm all alone, it seems.

So, with no color in my eyes,
no tears are left to stain.
No longer will I try,
I have to end this pain.

o_Dara

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2002-02-20 09:40 PM

Excellent first post ... welcome to passions

and keep your guard up

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-02-20 09:45 PM

O Dara darling this is soooooooooo fabulous, Absolutely first class debut writing well done

Very visual utterly beautiful portrayal here exquisite writing

Welcome to
Passions

I’m sure you’ll love it here

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2002-02-20 09:47 PM

o Dara,
Well shoot! I wanted to be the first to respond! What an unsettling poem! Welcome again and hope it only gets better and better.

O_Dara
Junior Member

since 2002-02-20

Posts 11

4 posted 2002-02-20 09:54 PM

Thanks everyone! I know I'll Love it here! Thanks for the warm welcome!

O_Dara

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-02-20 10:06 PM

Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2002-02-20 10:36 PM

Well done. Welcome to Passions. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2002-02-20 11:16 PM

Welcome! I hope you enjoy it around here

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-02-20 11:21 PM

YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words touch all our hearts, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet O'Dara, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, this is a marvelous first post! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2002-02-20 11:30 PM

so I'm thinking you have kids too?! LOL, sorry, kidding....

Welcome....this is really sad, but written very well.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2002-02-20 11:56 PM

SEA said it. This is sad, but very well written. Welcome to the blue pages.

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