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Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-20 05:09 PM

My head so filled with thoughts
I find it hard to think
My heart out of tune
as it skips and misses beats
My eyes well with water
yet tears do not form
Where inside of me
are all these emotions from

I want to tell the world
to forget all they know
take things as they come
except and let love grow

For society as we know it
plays a cruel and fatal part
expecially with emotions
related to ones heart

The way we are together
is perfect in every way
I could be with you forever
but what would others say

Friends can't be that close
something must be going on
so we hide the times together
for others may see it wrong

Why can't they understand
that we all need a friend
one that is there always
forever until the end

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0 Just
((T)) Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

1 posted 2002-02-20 05:23 PM

I like this a lot. It carries with it a lot of truth. Great job.
alan

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

2 posted 2002-02-21 02:27 AM

Many of us I am sure can relate to this, so I'm bumpin' ya!!! Love it!!

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2002-02-21 04:20 AM

Allan, Thanks for you kind words, they mean alot.

Amuseme -This is my second poem to be Bumped,
Thank you - It is true what has been said before about bumping a poem can actualy make a poet smile.

Hugs Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0 Just
((T)) Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

jennirey
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 198
North Richland HillsTx

4 posted 2002-02-21 06:35 AM

I like this, Very sweet.. Nice tribute to a friend..

Hugs and Bump!

Jen

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-02-21 09:04 AM

YAY!!! (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, all we need is a friend to smile and share our love and let it go around! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are sunshine to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Fiona, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2002-02-21 09:41 AM

GR8!

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

7 posted 2002-02-21 01:56 PM

Fee, as soon as I saw the title I knew this was going to be good. Plus, it hit me hard because I am so there where you are right now. You said this all better then I ever could have and you did it so well! I sorta feel like I was meant to read this, like someone else knows where I stand at this moment. Thank you! Great write here!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

8 posted 2002-02-21 02:39 PM

Friends can't be that close
something must be going on
so we hide the times together
for others may see it wrong

Why can't they understand
that we all need a friend
one that is there always
forever until the end

I especially enjoyed these verses. What a lovely, sweet tribute! Very nicely done!

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