Open Poetry #19 |
Timing...a love poem |
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
We could have met no sooner the timing wasn't right later, would have been all wrong we learned that in hindsight what brought us both together in that small window of time will always be a mystery perfection, so sublime fate has now revealed her hand she shook the hourglass and emptied the sand and scattered the grains for us to find your life and mine like parallel lines emerging than merging at just the right time I never before believed in fate but her timing was perfect not too soon, nor too late love at first sight the passions we find earthly delights of body and mind on that rainy day in June as in the woods, we shared our first kiss fate played a symphonic tune leading us now to moments of bliss and moments of love and moments of lust moments of truth and moments of trust two lives joining together as one in darkest of night and brightest of sun in moments of pain and laughter and fun for richer or poorer in sickness and health our love for each other provides the wealth |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thats the kind of wealth to have and hold...lovely madame...hugss... ~Vic "Silence is a friend who |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very beautiful, Madame. You paint wonderful images with delightful artistry. Thank you for sharing. ((Madame Chipmunk)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Madame Chipmunk I like your view!!! You are absolutely right, everything is clearer in hindsight. If I had married ealier the sun would not have as brightly shone. and I would not have known a son named Sean. And now we three do frolic Beneath the sky so blue Time turned again a friendly face As reunion showered us with love so true. Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lyra darling girl this is sooooooo incredibly amazing I can’t tell you how amazingly good this is, it’s brilliant just as you are. Do you know you are amazingly talented? Of course you don’t but you are indeed. Truly outstanding writing and I love it love it love it. I know this feeling well, absolutely fantastic writing And by the way I LOVE IT and you darling girl are superb Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Lyra - Your love makes you the one of the wealthiest people in the world. This is so well composed and so very nice. It sounds like you definitely had a Happy Valetines Day. Dave |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nothing could be truer, Lyra....timing is indeed everything. You express it well...and with perfect timing |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
and this is the way that it should be... Nice Lyra..I am impressed.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) God will always offer us true love when the time is right, and when we do find true love, it's all in great timing! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may June forever shine in your heart with loves happiness, HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lyra- Beautifully penned sentiments, my friend. Very well said. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Victoria...thanks so much...and you are right. This is the very best kind of wealth to have. I wouldn't trade it for all of the money in the world. Newell...thanks so much for that lovely compliment. Magic...thanks so much for the lovely poem...and I am very happy that things are working out so well for you also. Marsha...you are always so lavish with your praise...and I always soak it up like a sponge....thank you! Dave...thanks so much, and I had a wonderful Valentine's Day...David got me 11 roses. He thought he had bought a dozen, but someone must have counted wrong. It didn't matter to me, it was the beautiful thought that really counted. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Michael, Barry, Noah and Vicky... Thank you all for your replies. I may not have all the money in the world, but I feel like the wealthiest woman on Earth. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
*bump* |
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