Open Poetry #19 |
In Search of |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I've lost myself, where can I be, Searched high and low, I can't find me, I was right here, or so I thought, But when I looked, it seems I'm not. If I'm not here, perhaps I'm there, I'll take a look, but where is there? Can I be here, if I'm not there, Or could I be not anywhere? If you see me, please let me know, Lock all the doors, don't let me go, I'll be right there, for me to find, If you would please, be o' so kind. You say you found me, that I'm right here? I'll be right there, if there is near, I am so glad, me I did find, I really thought, I'd lost my mind. [This message has been edited by Tim (02-20-2002 10:10 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Tim - wow !! I liked this seek and find rhyme. I've lost myself before and was terribly lonesome without me. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! (big hugggssssss) Oh Tim, I know just how you feel, for when I was a little boy I thought I'd never find myself when I doubted my existance through all my abuse, but now just sharing love has helped me find myself and it is such a great feeling to love yourself through those trials! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, swet Tim, thank you for sharing! May love and light alwys shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
wow loved it |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Hey this is great Tim, kind of like hide n seek. floria Floria |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Tim - great write. Loved this tune... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You and Larry C are two of a mind... |
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