Open Poetry #19 |
Living The Poem |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I dont need to write of tender looks and soft touches. I dont need to write of smiles that light up my life. I dont need to write of love made in the dawning I dont need to write Im living the poem. I dont need to write of feathered kisses 'cross my lips. I dont need to write of teasing laughter in the dark. I dont need to write of dreams of ever after. I dont need to write Im living the poem. Love you |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
intersting suggestion here, poetry runs in our blood..nice write |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I can relate so much to this, though still working on the real time thing. Great idea, this. Living the poem...exactly! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like life is worth living Paula...James |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Way to go Paula, keep on living! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo sweet, dearest friend, love is always a poem waiting to be acted out upon the stage of life with whimsical grace and a smile! (kiss on cheek) May true love forveer have your heart sing, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paula, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula darling girl I suppose you think that I’m going to praise you to the skies? Hmmm? …….. Well, of course I am, this is utterly utterly wonderful, as YOU very well know. I can see you are living the poem indeed darling and it suits you sooooooo well This is really fabulous writing sometimes when you don’t expect it showers of moonbeams descend on you. They dropped like little twinkles of delight when I read this. Oh my eyes they are refreshed and my soul is washed in joy this is sooooooooo beautiful. Absolutely first class writing Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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