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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

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0 posted 2002-02-14 04:43 PM

A willowy canopy fans the night air
a breeze of enchantment lovingly shared
the soft ebb and flow of timeless love
touched by a velvet moonlight glove

A song of fluting winds softly sings
whispers of willows upon midnight wings
turquoise ripples blend in harmony
red roses bloom a summer symphony

Two lovers kiss within a passionate stream
lost within themselves instead of a dream
a wavelet of soft kisses upon their skin
sighing sweetly like strings of a violin

Making love like starry-eyed lovers do
Tides of love flowing with sweet deja vu

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-14-2002 04:44 PM).]

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-02-14 05:07 PM

Victoria dear, love your words.
"Making love like starry-eyed lovers do
Tides of love flowing with sweet deja vu"
Simply beautiful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2002-02-14 05:09 PM

enjoyed

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-02-14 06:08 PM

Oh Victoria....this is so beautiful...so romantic...just like this couple in love

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2002-02-14 06:20 PM

Oh, this is so romantic. Sigh..Love deja vu. Thats all I have.
S

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-02-14 06:31 PM

"Sighing sweetly like strings of a violin"...James

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-02-14 07:11 PM

floria..thank you sweetie..hugs

vandana..thank you for peeking in hugs

madame..ohhhh so cute ha..hugs

sandra...thank you dear one...hugss

james..glad you enjoyed james.. hugs

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-02-14 10:08 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, there's no feeling more happier than having deja vu happily of true loves bliss! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-02-14 10:17 PM

Expressed with much imagery as only you can
do...nice Vic..

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

9 posted 2002-02-14 10:23 PM

Victoria - Beautiful flow to this romantic write. Very nice.

Dave

ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

10 posted 2002-02-14 11:45 PM

My screen temporarily froze on a 'Chipmunk' graphic, Vickie.  hehehe
Had to reload just to fire this gun of words that say:

willowy!  that is the word i have been searching for to describe much of your
poetry.  Sort of a sleepy, graceful majesty that sways and pulls the reader
into its green armed clutches.  Am i ate up or what?  LOL

tSR

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2002-02-15 12:15 PM

Willowy is and adjective I use for a lot of things these days, and yes this romantic poem was that indeed, but you made this look so darn easy, and I know it I have a devil of a time with these LOL, great job.

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes.
Let the reader catch their own breath."
~Elizabeth Clarkson Zwart~

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2002-02-15 12:19 PM

Your poetry makes my eyes water,
I could surround myself in your words
and bathe in the scent for days.
The scenery is captivating,
and makes me wish I was there.

Lovely as always Victoria~

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

13 posted 2002-02-15 12:20 PM

thank you noah hon..love your
sweet responses...hugss

thank you barry and i hope you
had a nice valentines day

dave..thank you so much..

:

Jeff..thank you for those kind words
as always..and for peeking in tonight jeff

*Happy Valentines day to all*

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

14 posted 2002-02-15 12:26 PM

thank you so much Sharon..i love sonnets..i have to force myself not to rhyme most of the time..glad you enjoyed..

hugs

thank you Ms. Serenade..always nice hearing from you...hugs

ecrivan...thank you for peeking in tonight and i hope you had a lovely valentines day too..

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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

15 posted 2002-02-15 12:32 PM

Romantic, sweet poetry..Happy Valentines

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

16 posted 2002-02-17 11:26 PM

Victoria-
  What a beautifully penned and romantic piece.
  I very much enjoyed this.
  Hugs,
  ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Martie

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California

17 posted 2002-02-18 12:14 PM

Victoria--beautiful and romantic!

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

18 posted 2002-02-18 09:21 AM

thank you Vicky..and for peeking in today

thank you Martie..i am pleased you enjoyed

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