Open Poetry #19 |
Angry River Of Words |
strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
All my friends, not to worry, this is not now. I had to drum up feelings of my childhood to write this. I am fine. floria Angry River Of Words The angry river rages on the rocky coast, Rushing violently and breaking against the shore. Cold and threatening in it's thrust of movement, Oh, to be a seagull that I might soar. To rise above and fly away into infinity. And not be bruised by cruel words of anger. And beaten down and battered against the rocks. But fly from all impending threat of danger. How cruel are words as furious as the waters. And dark and heavy clouds that hover overhead. That threaten with more violence and storms of thunder. Refuse to stop until they know I am dead. Where is my refuge, what place that I might hide? Dark caverns dug deep within this earth. Where I might now descend to never more return. Perhaps not even one would recall my day of birth. Oh raging waves of life that beat the soul. And wear it down that it no more may breathe. But take away each thing that makes me whole. And cover me with dark and deadly sheath. Floria Kelderhouse © 2002 [This message has been edited by strbbux (02-20-2002 09:45 AM).] |
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Kathleen Junior Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 20Indiana |
What a release! I am so glad you don't feel this way now! Kathleen |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I too am so happy you don't feel this way now, I have known these feelings for so long and I know how frustrating it must had been for you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may God forever bless you with love and joy forever more! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thanks to those silver linings of those clouds then, well penned |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Floria~ Stirring emote~ 'Oh, to be a seagull that I might soar' You are soaring ...~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Floria Thank you for opening up your heart to us. Such powerful images were portrayed through your wonderful words. Take care.......Sue |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing...hope you feel better...James |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
I am so happy that you clarified as to when you felt like this Floria....belated hugs of compassion for this poem!!! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you so much Noah for your kindness, floria Kathleen thanks so much for your reply, I tried to reply to one of your poems yesterday and when i hit enter, it would not accept. Said there was an error? I tried again and couldn't, Now I cant find it. floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Ecrivan thanks so much for your reply, and I never thought of it that way, That cloud did have a silver lining. thanks. floria Marge, thank you so much,, You are kind. floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Sue thank you so much, It seems that a lot of healing occurs when writing, At least for me, and those poems turn out rather powerful..thanks. floria Yes James, All is fine, thank you much. floria Brian, thank you for your wonderful words of reply and I read your poem on child abuse, it was so heartwrenching, and a wonderful write. thanks for the hugs..floria Floria |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Floria~ Strong emotions, good to get them out...HUGS and So much PEACE to you..... Lauren~ Step through the |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you so much Lauren,, I am having a problem answering to posts, internet problems. So if anyone reads this, I will be back answering soon as possible.grrrrrr...thanks again Lauren for your hugs. floria Floria |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Wow ... now that's 'writing' |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Sometimes just sending the words into the wind makes us soar. Beautiful work Floria! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you Rex, I am humbled by your remark. floria Floria |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Floria; Your poem brought tears to my eyes, and I am so happy you put the explanation there. To recover from emotional, verbal, or physical abuse takes time. The tragedy is some never recover. I rejoice with you that this is behind you. Great writing, Floria. This is a magnificiant piece. Wanda |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank You Amusemi, yes, writing is so so healing. floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wanda, thank you, You truly lifted me with your reply, thanks dear. floria Floria |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
anger is a stange emotion, thanks for sharing and making me feel better knowing someone else feels this way also |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Shadow, I used to feel this way. My mind went digging into my childhood memories and this one came up...It is from my childhood. I think that is why I tried to be and continue to try to be a good mother....thank you, I hope it helped. floria Floria |
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