Open Poetry #19 |
the constant |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
in a world torn by change there is always that one constant that one thing, feeling, or person that always remains as a thing it can be something simple a word, a picture, a flower, a song, a candle, a key (a key to what? you ask. . . just a key) as a feeling it can be a little more complex a look, a touch, a whisper, a dance, a beat, a tear (a tear is a feeling? a feeling. . . untold) as a person it can be impossible to describe a parent, a spouse, a child, a lover, a teacher, a poet (are poets people? perhaps they are. . . just poets) the constant is always unchanging, as before as it is now as it will be as it was it is all around us it is the sky, the earth, the air, the water, is is the fire it is a god, a goddess, a priest, a priestess, is is the God it is all around us and we are a part of it our lives are part of the constant the one thing that brings people together that pulls them apart that gives them strength that makes them weak brings light, brings dark, brings joy, brings pain the constant that is love that is the constant ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Love is the one thing that makes the world go around, yes, this is great. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven Tis true love is a constant as are your words of peace and hope. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes even though some things change constantly and change is good it is nice to have those constants...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, this is so good John. My constant has been this place. I sure hope it never goes away. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Well done enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! BRAVO!!! Love is what makes the world go around always and all we ever need is the magic of love close to our hearts! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet freind, your words always ake me smile, HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sahring! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sven, you said it perfectly... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sven- I very much enjoyed this. Wonderfully said. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Yes I needed this today. Thanks Sven. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Wonderful poem Sven! |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Sven; This is beautifully written. I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Wanda |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh - what would a teacher who's a poet be??.. Not a person for sure.. My class would never buy that.. Nicely done, Sven.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...just a poet...that sings a song of heart... constant... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - my friend, your words are so true, and love is the constant. Nice write... BC |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
You know, Sven Pen. If we're ever in doubt, there are poets like you to remind us all. This is written with your usual brilliant style. I love it! For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanks for reminding me..life has been havoc for me these days and i especially liked your comments in parenthesis..you talking to yourself?? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sven, this makes me want a cup of Constant Tea, which always reminds me of the scent of orange trees, and the feel of peeling a big juicy orange. I think I should go eat some breakfast now. I really enjoyed this one. Love really is the essence of constancy. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You constantly amaze me..with such subtle depth. I admire someone that takes me there in slow descention. Wonderful Sven. Sincerely, Regina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all my friends. . . I'm reminded of what stays in life. . . and what stays in the heart. . . thank you. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven, I really really really liked this poem and I hand it2u 4the creative presentation, expression and flow made it an exquisite read sweetie... Big smiles2uDearPoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Just like watching a tennis match Lovely! Admiring you at Passions. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
PoetFriend Coco and BrightStar. . . thank you for reading my friends. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sven, indeed love makes the world go 'round. An excellent write.. I enjoyed. Maree |
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