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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-19 01:48 PM

you say there is nothing
you can say to ease my pain
but don’t you know our blood
flows from the same vein
when I was empty
you came and filled me up
replacing the chipped
with a loving cup
showed me I was deserving
with your time to spend
a heart that you convinced me
was well worth the mend
you were a sweet beacon
to a drowning soul
and told me that forever
was something I could hold
when I wanted to lay down
and let my faith fly away
you showed me hope
a belief that it could stay
so much of my pain
you have alone freed
you are my echo
the echo of my need

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-02-19 01:57 PM

This poem is stunning...I hope he hears the echoe of your love in his heart....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-19 02:42 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I love it, I love it, your gorgeous words of love always light all our hearts, may this true happiness forever radiate in your soul! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

3 posted 2002-02-20 01:06 AM

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Good to have a matching bloodtype handy when you need a transfusion.
And of course you tell the story well.
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rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2002-02-20 02:17 AM

1slick_lady,

I really liked this

It's so pretty and powerful.. I enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

5 posted 2002-02-20 02:33 AM

There's a person like that in my life and I treasure him more and more each day.

This poem really puts that into perspective for me....Thanks so very much for sharing this. I always love your work.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2002-02-21 10:56 AM

Lucky you

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-02-21 11:06 AM

Amazing, so much feeling, written so well.
Sandra

O_Dara
Junior Member

since 2002-02-20

Posts 11

8 posted 2002-02-21 11:23 AM

I love it

Wonderfull work!Strong echoes of love.

O_Dara
I'm Still

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